Just when you think it’s safe to go out
There is a knock at your heart, tap, tap
Trepidation calls, bearing flowers
Roses, red like the blood flowing still
Through your veins to a stone cold heart
Violets, deep blue as your eyes that weep
To remember the days without fear
Orchid, black reflecting your humour
‘Love me, love me not?’, petals shredded
Destroying the thing of beauty that
Once was your life. Stamens, yellow stain
Rough hands. Colours bleeding into one
Dull grey where once: yellow red, blue
Delicate stems, plain perfect blossom
Dismay brought you a bouquet. But why?
To remind you that he’s there. Tap tap
Just when you think it’s safe to go out.
I had to go to the supermarket this morning and, everywhere I looked, there were red hearts and roses, cards and chocolates and lovers strolling hand in hand. There is a feeling of romance in the air and, this year for some reason, I am not really dealing with it very well. So many tears today I just locked myself away and wrote this poem because I didn’t know what else to do.
Lisa x
Your poem says it all. Very poignant!
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Thank you Sadje :O) x
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Valentine’s day comes and goes and is so commercial and superficial now Lisa.
Your love is there forever. It doesn’t matter what day, what year, what you’re doing, or where you are.
Treat yourself to a long soak with a large glass of bubbly. You deserve it.
Love and hugs to you. xx
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Oh Peter, what a lovely thing to say, thank you. I don’t have a bath but I’ll definitely have a glass of something. Love and hugs back at you xxx
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You’ll just have to sit in the sink! Careful of the taps!!
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That made me chuckle, thanks Peter 😊 xx
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Very nice poetry! I loved it! ❤
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Thank you Carol Ann :O) x
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(((((((Lisa)))))))). I am so sad for you. No words. Xo
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I’m ok, it will pass XX
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I know, xoxo
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I love the imagery of the colours and your poem is far more poignant than than the commercial gushing on cards and giifts at this time of year.
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Thanks so much, I really appreciate that 😊 xx
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My heart really goes out to you. I think your poem is so clever and imaginative. Sending love and a big hug ❤
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Ah bless you :O) Back at you xx
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(((—-)))
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Loved the poem Lisa. But hate to think of you feeling that way. Sending love and hugs. x
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Ah bless you Darren, you’re so sweet. Thank you my friend 😊 XX
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I had 4 years of that. Get YOURSELF a rose, and a box of chocolates. Because YOU are worth it.
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Sounds like a plan, thanks Boo 😊 xx
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You go girl!
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