River Dixon is one of the most talented writers I’ve ever come across and sometimes his work just blows me away, as was the case today when I read this piece so, naturally, I had to share it with you :O) x
The old man sat
Legs crossed, foot bouncing
The blinds were drawn
Summer heat screaming
From the warped floorboards
You could see the dust, each particle
Floating in faint strips of daylight
Terminating along a piss-stained rug
I waited patiently
Struggling to maintain
As the stench assaulted each nostril
The integrity of the chair, in question
As I shifted uncomfortably
He lit a cigarette
Blue rings of smoke danced
From one ray to another
The dust, emitting a strange glow
As if tiny cosmos were being born
And just as quickly, fading into nothing
The Big Bang, right there in front of me
I was a witness
My God, I’d give anything
For a glass of water
He took a long, deep drag
Then snuffed out the cigarette
Against the table
No ashtray, hadn’t been one for years
If ever
He leaned to the left, shrugged a shoulder
Squinted his…
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Excellent, and thank you for making me aware of his writing! Just read the whole poem and am now following River.
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You’re welcome – I’ve been a fan for ages and just couldn’t resist sharing this amazing work – so happy you liked it :O) x
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YOUR BOOK!!! YAY!!!
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Yep it’s out there 😃 XX
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Thanks for sharing this interesting slice of life
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Excellent writing.Following River Dixon now.Thanks for sharing.
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Glad you enjoyed it 😊
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Are you still around Lisa ?
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Hi Rory, yes I’m still around :O) Sorry I’ve not been about but marketing a book and writing a second one takes up far more time than I thought plus there was summer and the beach and…well you know. How are things with you? How’s your shoulder – any better? xx
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No, l am good thanks Lisa, l just wanted to check in with you and see if you were well 🙂
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Glad to hear that you’re ok and thanks for checking up on me – you’re so thoughtful. xx
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Pleasure – have a great weekend ahead Lisa 🙂
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You too Rory :O) xx
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Thanks 🙂
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Hey! I haven’t seen you in quite some time here on WP and I wanted to let you know that I am thinking about you. I hope you are just way too busy to blog! 🙂
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Hi Wendi, you’re so sweet to think of me. I know it’s been ages and sorry not to have been around. I’ve been trying to market my book and I’m in the middle of writing another one and it just seems to take up all my time. How are you doing? I hope that life is being good to you xx
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I completely understand and I am so thankful you have been too busy for great reasons 🙂 Wishing you great success…….
And when you become really famous, Bless you my friend.
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Thank you Wendi, that really means a lot to me and I hope that life treats you kindly and brings you every happiness x
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Are you still alive Lisa? Hopefully so, keeping well and ploughing on with your books 🙂
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