You can’t see over, unscalable summit
You can’t see through the feather light density
You can’t see under, unfathomable depths
You can’t see round, a glimpse of infinity
You can’t see unwillingly fabricated
You can’t see erratically erected walls
You can’t see me, trying to break through to you.
Another little ditty written in response to a gentle nudge from Fandango and his one word prompt…..
Lisa x
All About Life 
A lot of internal emotions throughout you little poem, and yes we set up our own barriers, and then life has already created lots of hurdles to overcome as well. I wrote a poem many years ago, not long after the last time I had a stroke. It’s about trying to overcome life’s huge obstacles.
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2017/07/05/this-fence/
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Yes it’s exactly that Ivor but I’m going to continue hammering on the walls until I break through ;O)
Your poem was lovely as were the two lines that you wrote after the loss of your love xx
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Yes … over 6 years ago now, … beautiful memories….. She made become a better man xx
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I know what you mean, I liked myself a whole lot more when my husband was still around…xx
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Nice :O) x
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It gets easier to see with time, with the help of friends, and as the barriers become easier to dislodge.
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They’ll come tumbling down one day 😊 xx
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I wish I could write like that. It really has to hit me before I come up with something. You do this like almost every day….
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Thanks Boo but I’m sure I have a lot more time than you and anyway I love hearing all about your life 😊 XX
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wait till you read todays!!!
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I’ll look forward to it 😃
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A fascinating take on the prompt. My favorite line: “You can’t see round, a glimpse of infinity” Wonderful
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate your kind comments 😊 x
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