You found me, the real me, hidden behind the face I showed to the world
You listened. You held me when I was afraid. You helped me explore
Those fears which caused me to live behind the high barricade
You showed me my beauty which I could never before see
You taught me to laugh at the flaws I’d thought so dire
You showed me my strength and my tender heart
You taught me to work and take pride in it all
With you I laughed, I cried, I truly felt
Love and loved. For you, only you
Were my guide but I lost you
On the path we took
Together. To
Love
Written, once again, as response to a one word prompt from Fandango who has definitely sparked something in my imagination.
Lisa
x
Wonderfully depicted, the words used are able to exude the innermost heartfelt feelings. Hope to see more from you. Have hope, write on! 😊😊😊
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Very kind, thank you so much :O)
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you are welcome. 😊
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Absolutely BRILLIANT Lusa. So toyching. So pougnant. So heatrending. But yet beautiful. Lots of love to you xoxo
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Thanks so much Lorraine and lots of love to you too – hope you have a great day :O) xx
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Just beautiful xx
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Thanks Dodge :O) xxx
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This is absolutely beautiful. So tender too. 🙂
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Thanks so much :O) xx
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So happy that my prompts have been able to spark your imagination. Best feedback ever! Thanks.
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They really do so thank you too :O) x
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This is beautiful, but I felt so sad that the person was lost on the journey. Lovely words – you have such a talent with writing emotively 🙂
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That’s incredibly kind, thank you so much 😊🙏
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Reblogged this on Beutiflee and commented:
The power of love can bring you confidence to be yourself. The real you is in there. Enjoy this post and checkout the other poems. She is great!
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How very kind, thanks so much, I really appreciate it 😊 x
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You’re welcome 🙂
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wow! true love described so beautifully.
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Thank you my friend 😊🙏 how’s life with you? Xx
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it is truly my pleasure. even if i don’t comment, please know i love all you do.
………..me, nothin’ but a party! 🙂 and you my dear?
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You are such a very kind person Wendi, I do hope that things are ok for you at the moment. All good my end thank you 😊 xx
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YAY! love to read that all is good on your end! thank you for your kindness, it is very much appreciated.
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This is beautifully written
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Thank you so much :O) x
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You’re welcome
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It’s a beautiful poem. Love the warm feelings of love.
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Thanks so much Sadje :O) xx
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You’re welcome.
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